I'm sorry...
I find this piece quite atonal, doesn't sound right. I don't even know if this has a key per se. The beat and the melodic pattern actually sounded well, but not together. Better luck next time...
- Professor Admiral Bacon
I'm sorry...
I find this piece quite atonal, doesn't sound right. I don't even know if this has a key per se. The beat and the melodic pattern actually sounded well, but not together. Better luck next time...
- Professor Admiral Bacon
Dat beat...
I'm definately digging this. I like how you start simplistically and wait to add on element. Great job, keep on cranking out this kind of tunes.
- Professor Admiral Bacon
Thanks dude it's nice to hear that from someone experienced in making good music. Really encouraging :) Thx!
Benny
Good...but
It definately needs somes work. I like the concept of a simplistic beginning with the bass drum and clap; however, when the clap comes in the bass drum loses it's bassiness; I would suggest modifying the clap via an LP filtre to not make it so sharp. Also, I would use a better piano VST (I'm guessing you're using FL keys); If you have Sytrus, I would use one of their piano VST's something with a little more substance and reverb- better yet if you have Nexus. Furthermore, the one thing that's essential to this piece is the BASS! Y'know the one that's syncopated on the offbeat! Overall this is a good start to what could become a piece of epicness. I see great potential in you, but you've got to have the right instruments for the piece (which was some my mistakes starting off on FL studio). So keep on making music and listen to mine if you want.
- Professor Admiral Bacon
ROFL! Nice
Overall nice production and mixing. The lyrics are worthy of that of Weird Al. Keep up the good work!
- Professor Admiral Bacon
I'm digging this
The hardest thing about House (and electronic music in general) is taking something that is repepitive and seemingly random and making interesting. You SIr have accomplished this feat in a most exellent and spectacular way. I can tell that you put a lot of time, effort, and soul into this and it certainly paid off because this is nothing less than a masterpiece. Outstanding job with this production and keep up the good work!
- Professor Admiral Bacon
=D =D
I do my best to vary it up! thanks for noticing! :)
ty for the review! <3
Pretty Sweet
Overall an exellent piece. Very melodious and counterpunctual at sometimes. I liked what you did with the filtering and panning. My only suggestion is to bring up the volume of the synth playing the melody a little bit; other than that great job! Keep making music :)
- Professor Admiral Bacon
Freakin' Awesome
This is one of the best trance pieces I've heard on Newgrounds. It's perfect: an empowering melody, soothing piano breaks, a light yet driving bass; it's every thing trance should be. Exellent work! By the way, I can't blame you for putting it in techno initially, I hate bloody 0 bombers, my lastest piece got bombed down to like 2.50, and I still trying to work it up to a votable range. Anyway, just keep cranking out the good stuff.
- Professor Admiral Bacon
Thanks man haha :) I know what you mean about the 0 bombers -_-'
Thanks for the feedback!
Good
I'm glad to see another electronic artist on newgrounds remixing a classical piece. Unfortunately, this piece doesn't do justice to the original as much as I hope it would. If I were to remix this piece I would start the tempo out slow like you did and then bring it up to speed with a harder beat and y'know just something to make you wanna dance.
- Professor Admiral Bacon
Interesting
I much say it is a very chill piece, yet I do indeed want to dance. Interesting maneveur of switching the bass to the on beat during one section. My only critism, is that I wish it was longer because it is already very good. May I suggest adding some synth "solos" to fill a few bars. Overall great job, keep up the good work!
- Professor Admiral Bacon
NO, I wouldn't wake up..
Dude, this piece is so beautiful that I am literally crying right now. BEST TRANCE ON NEWGROUNDS EVER!!!!!! It's like the music lifts up my soul. This would be definately one of the songs I would to be played at my funeral. GREAT WORK!! Keep it up man and check out some of my music if you want.
- Professor Admiral Bacon
Age 32, Male
Phila. College of Pharmacy
Philadelphia, PA
Joined on 12/18/09